Tuesday, 11 September 2018

Show not tell.

Work with a partner to see if you can rewrite one of these  to ‘Show not Tell’
I felt angry.I slammed the door and I threw my bag away and I cry much as i can.

It was a sunny day.My skin was burning and face was red and all of body was burning.

It was cold at the beach: I put my jumper, gloves and scarf on. I was rubbing my hands together and I blew on my hands.
Brainstorm as many different ideas as you can that show that it was cold at the beach.

The wind was so strong and the wind was blew my hair. My body was shake and the sky blackened.

Now try to write a paragraph using these ideas that shows it was cold at the beach, without using the words beach or cold (don't just switch the word cold to another adjective such as freezing as that is still just telling. - Try to show that you are cold. Think about how you are feeling/what you are doing/what you see/hear/feel to help show this.

Monday, 2 July 2018

Force and Motion - Expo

Task description: For this task we had to create a presentation about our team Expo. In the presentation it will show a introduction about what and why Force and Motion is good to teach people and the ideas that we chose, the idea we followed, our success and faliure and last what we should do next time.

Tuesday, 1 May 2018

All about me on the holiday.
On the holiday me and my family went to the warehouse to by a shoe's to my cousin and then we came back and i was going to my uncle's house and i sleep in my uncle's house and the next day me and my cousin went to the Library and we make a ANZAC biscuits in the Library.

And we came back and we went to the park and we tag in the park and we come back home and me and my cousin eat went we finish the eat we just stay at home and watching tv and we sleep and we wake up in the next day we went to the train to go to Otahuhu to by a fish and we came back home.

Monday, 19 March 2018

Visual mihi

I have the family sigh because I love my family.
I have the netball because I like netball.
I have the tongan flag because I am tongan.
I did the holy bible book because I go to church

Wednesday, 14 March 2018

Rosaleen T1W6 - Jigsaw Reading

T1W6 - Jigsaw Reading - Fingerprints by Iona McNaughton

A) PAGES 1 & 2
C) PAGES 4 & 5
Looking  for evidence
How do police find fingerprints
Matching a fingerprint.
How to take a fingerprint.
Sometimes they might touch walls and doors and leave their fingerprints on those.

Even though there are more than 7 billion people in the world,no two people have the same fingerprints.

Whether you are seven,seventeen,
Seventeen - seven years old, your fingerprints stay the same.

powder. They put the powder on surfaces at the crime scene with a special brush. The powder sticks to the sweat and oil that is left behind when someone touches a surface. If they find a fingerprint.
If you have a twin and that twin as a fingerprint then the other twin doesn’t have the same fingerprint when you look close too your finger you can see your fingerprint and when you compare your fingerprint with another person it's not the same
The Details is when it talk about a easiest way to take your fingerprint it say that you need a Stamp pad and you need a white sheet of paper. And then it say that press your